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An Early Bird Gets A Porsche
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An Early Bird Gets A Porsche |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
The sun was only A block from my house When the pigeons Started across the street They always make it So I gunned it To keep them On their pigeon toes They took off in a flurry But one with a crumb Of something in its beak Just didn't hurry...Bumph! I saw feathers helter-skelter In my rear view mirror Like a pillow Exploding under a dream |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I had to dodge two doves this morning... but they had no fear and time to sit on the fence laughing at my poor Oldsmobile. *G* But it won't be spitting feathers all day! LOL I love this one, sweets... it starts and ends with wonderful images... and I'll try not to think too much about the in-between. *G* Not thinking shouldn't be too difficult for me... right? *G* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh oh...you better hope those other pigeons don't take pigeon revenge on your car...James |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
My, you are creative! Don't most people hunt pigeons with BB guns? Shenachie |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Uh oh, hope those pigeons don't start coming back with a vengeance now! (smiles) This is cleverly written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I bet it sure messed up your car, Mr.Toe. This was very creative, I liked it  ~ pigeon Toe hugsLyra |
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