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Of Awe and Store
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Of Awe and Store |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Awe and Store I walk about in mental awe Each thought a maul of dark and doubt They form a wall of shadowed pour Where dragons wait for me in scout. It comes to me on waves of wile Twisting roaring knaves in turn Shores hot sand a desert Isle With steps of cool as yet to learn. But time is quickly running out And there’s no way to clear the mist So I will leave this world in doubt. For I don’t think it will desist. I’ve made for me a calloused sole That dissipates the heat of play It is a temporary goal To stay the problems of my day A thick and calloused underfoot To dampen down the sheer input. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I walk about in mental awe Each thought a maul of dark and doubt They form a wall of shadowed pour Where dragons wait for me in scout. It comes to me on waves of wile Twisting roaring knaves in turn Shores hot sand a desert Isle With steps of cool as yet to learn. But time is quickly running out And there's no way to clear the mist So I will leave this world in doubt. For I don't think it will desist. ========================================= Youre not leaving anywhere in doubt... youre the one who helps us figure the whys out!! Your poetry leaves us in awe of your store ... leaves us hanging on your every word wishing for more.  I see Randys roaring and taking your pen again. All the Rain must be making him feel caged in. He needs something made of raspberry to set him free.  *winkiwinkie*   mothyme |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very interesting piece of work Sy....(and, I know exactly what walking around in "mental awe" is like....) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I stand in awe of mist and wind while round me swift tornados spin such as the words of Sy's to wind the perimeter of my small mind |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful!! Enjoyed my morning read from you Sy! ~Big Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*Wonderfully penned* like it a lot Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Strong write, Sy. much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You have Randy eating out of your hand so I don't think he will be any trouble. Winkiewinkie Stinky.  Toe, And there are no pills to take. Sunshine, No small mind yours. Enchantress, Have a wonderful day dear. Charisma, Thank you sweet for the like. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You confound my mind---sigh, sy, you take a sonnet form and add a twist--sorry, former bartender here--grin--and then? The wisdom shines through, and it's like, after the drink? who the hell cares? gimme another! thank gawd, for my morning "sy!" |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Seymour, I like what you've written esp this I walk about in mental awe Each thought a maul of dark and doubt They form a wall of shadowed pour Where dragons wait for me in scout. brings a vivid picture (my imagination :P) of monsters lurking in the dark, and a knight that comes along to slay the dragons... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Good morning and thank you my dear. And thank God for my Serenity, morning love. Exactly and good morning to you mon cherie. :aqueeze: |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy what utter utter truth and wisdom falls from within your soul. As always your pen draws wonder and awe from my soul and I’m left gasping in sheer admiration of you amazing words While drowning in the sea of where I reached for hand of friend’s who care And in reaching out I found a hand Which helped me to understand There is in touch a soothing balm That fills a soul with easing calm The truth is there if we would seek Inside us all just take a peek The wise of guise you gift to me Revealed a path’s discovery You shine a light upon the way That guides me to a hope of stay Doubts can’t darken your clear sight You are the one who shines hopes light I love it utterly utterly utterly, was there ever such a wise one as you? Well thank you for the light again.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Dear girl the light that you see is your own. The only thing I might have done is turn the switch on. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour this is wonderful writing, I love the wisdom you impart with such finesse. Don’t go telling mum things like that she’s so gullible she’ll believe you And I’ll never be able to shift her off the computer, and everyone knows I’m the better writer around here. I meant between Mum Emma and I Your writing is amazing it flows with such deep thoughts and wise words to live by. YOU as mum is so fond of saying are a very very good writer. Now just don’t tell her I said she was right otherwise she’ll crow about that too.  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, There is no second best in your family, you are all first. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
when one meets legendary words there is but one response and that is to sigh jeff *smile* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this, sweet friend, you are such a delight to us every day with your wonderful words to share! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Clever reply, thank you. Noah, Once again thank you. |
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