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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-25 05:29 AM


Most Beautiful Love

Am I afraid that I will lose my love?
Yes there is a place in my heart that is
scared to death that she will simply go away.
And in so going I would no longer feel the joy
she brought into my life in her special loving way.
I am afraid it would be much more than I could bare
if I should ever have to endure the loss
of this most beautiful love that we share.
For surely there is not a living soul in this world who would want to lose someone for which they care.
Yet sometimes we are forced to come face to face
with a reality that seems scary and unsure.
I wonder if she loves me as much as I love her?
Yes I do believe she loves me but in some
ways I'm not so sure.

JamesLee
June25
2002


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Ladycat
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1 posted 2002-06-25 05:42 AM


Never doubt yourself.  That is all that I can say to that.  It was a wonderful piece and I think about things like this all the time.  

"I wonder if she loves me as much as I love her?
Yes I do believe she loves me but in some
ways I'm not so sure."


That is the catch all!!  Once again, I love this piece.  

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2002-06-25 10:14 AM


We all have doubts. You have to love as though you know it's returned, and enjoy it while you have it. Good one.

Nan

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-06-25 05:13 PM


Thank you Ladycat and Nan...as you begin to see the beauty of love and realize what you have been missing it is painful to think that you may lose it...I can only go on past experiences and each time I have lost it...but hopefully not this time...James
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4 posted 2002-06-25 08:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, I know this feeling ever so much, sweet friend, fear not, for time will tell and as long as you contribute as she will do the same, this love will be yours forever! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-06-25 08:14 PM


JamesMichael~

'I wonder if she loves me as much as I love her?'

Oh sweet man ... the real question should always be ....
Did I love her/him all I could ?

*gentle hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Larry C
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6 posted 2002-06-27 02:32 AM


James,
Life has enough sorrows without creating them before they exist. And better to have ventured on love than to never have loved at all. Courage dear friend. Have faith and endure.

Show you care to those you love...today.

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