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Dreams of You
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Dreams of You |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Last night I dreamed of rapture On a beach with silver sands Morning came with me bewildered Holding stardust in my hands your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There you go again... you write some fine lines...subtle and classy with a beauty all their own. Nice~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awesome, Kris! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
beautifully done here... *sigh* How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very well done, indeed! I guess it wasn't La Jolla Cove... Certainly NOT the Silver Strand. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think this time...I'll just plead the 5th and *sigh* right along with the other gals... *breathtaking...you* ML~ Devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! You're so good at these!! Love this one in particular! *Hugging you real tight* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous romantic and beautiful poem tidbits you write, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
It's simple and sensual, leaving you wanting more. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ohhhh I just loooove this! love to read you Maree |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
This is hot! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I can make that dream come true Whisk you far away to the tropics Splashing in water so blue Together in love's topic |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
GORGEOUS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lovely....so well done. This is beautiful, it feels like there could be more beauty added to this. *s* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to hunt for this-- it reminded me of one of the few short poems I have written---mind if I share? "I held a dream in the palm of my hand. I held it too tight. It turned into sand. All I had left was the sand and the sweat, that slipped through my fingers leaving only regret." Your work is inspiring. (and btw...smiling, I am NOT a man hater! Just a bit blue these days...) |
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