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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2002-06-24 11:06 PM

Sultry summer afternoon
And the verve
Of her essence
Painted the very air
Thick
With soulful mood...

Scarlet staircase
And an eclectic spray
Of art
Set the scene
As together we fell
Into the nooks
Of her spirit...

Hair spiraled down,
Clinging soft to her face
As her fingers flew, caressed,
Owned steel string
In the steamy atmosphere...

And in turn, she owned us
With her sensuous voice
And richness of song-
For in her soul
Ours were home.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

[This message has been edited by Alwye (06-25-2002 11:27 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-06-24 11:19 PM

So delightful is the afternoon you write of...I got a mental image of selling pink lemonade, and I was the one who was buying~

CocoBaci
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2 posted 2002-06-24 11:53 PM

Oh how nice it is4me2come across this splendid read...
I truly enjoyed reading your poem and send2u PoetFriend Alwye hugsNsmiles...
*~coco~*

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-06-25 12:01 PM

Oh..this is one of your best..it's so nice to read you again.

TwoHeartsOnePen
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state of determination

4 posted 2002-06-25 12:15 PM

Truly beautiful work here. It kisses the senses in just the right way.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Mistletoe Angel

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5 posted 2002-06-25 03:01 AM

YAY!!! Oh Krista, I have missed reading your gorgeous words so so much, this is sooooooo beautiful and shines with the surreal wonders of a summer day! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-06-25 09:52 AM

Krista~
Not sure what concert you went to ... but, oh my ... you brought it alive !
Beautiful thoughts sprinkled throughout this piece~

It is SO good to see ya' gal~
Welcome home~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Alwye

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In the space between moments

7 posted 2002-06-25 11:29 PM

Thank you for all the lovely replies, everyone. It's good to write a little poetry again....most of my muse is slaving over songs nowadays. And a special thank you to you, Marge, for catching my little error....oops....

Much love to ya all.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Sven

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8 posted 2002-06-26 04:53 PM

"the verve of her essence. . ."

I like that line. . . it's the perfect image here. . . great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana

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9 posted 2002-06-26 07:16 PM

enjoy

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2002-06-27 02:29 AM

Oh Alwye, I've missed reading you, this is simply divine

Maree

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11 posted 2002-06-27 06:07 AM

Good to see your words again Krista. This piece was a treat.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

12 posted 2002-06-27 01:36 PM

I do believe you are trying to get me to pick a new favorite of yours and this one could do it, but I am stubborn so don't count on me switchin too quick. LOL I can't begin to express how beautiful this is in both imagery and verbal usage. I am marking it for my library and will be indulging in it quite often I am sure. So very nice to see your name appear before me.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (06-27-2002 07:57 PM).]

BloomingRose
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13 posted 2002-06-27 01:51 PM

Scarlet staircase
And an eclectic spray
Of art
Set the scene
As together we fell
Into the nooks
Of her spirit...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Very nice writing, with lovely imagery.
Enjoyed.

Deb

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-06-27 01:53 PM

Krista, a most enjoyable way to
spend a summer afternoon...

Alwye

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In the space between moments

15 posted 2002-06-27 10:28 PM

Sven- thanks very much!

vandana- thanks!

Maree- Thank you, it's nice to hear from ya! I've been pretty out of the loop for a while now....been too busy putting my words to music instead of in the form of poetry..sometimes the muse comes back to good ol pip though, which is wonderful.

Gentle Spirit- Thanks so much, it means a lot.

Mark- Mark! It's been a while! I'm glad you enjoyed this....I enjoyed the day that I wrote of. I went to see my guitar instructor perform at her CD release party...it was pretty incredible. Anyways, thanks for reading, I appreciate it.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

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