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ScrpyCJ
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since 2002-06-24
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0 posted 2002-06-24 10:17 PM


Head Aching,
Im Running out of time,
My life feels a big blank up until now,
Spinning out of control,
I need a painkiller,
Stop pushing me aside,
Just give one part of the day,
You make me feel like a broken glass,
I will try and Settle down,
I dont care if your angry anymore,
Grow up stupid,
I will have to cheat my way thruogh this one,
Im sorry for you and for me both.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-25-2002 09:19 AM).]

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cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
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A Cloud In the Sky
1 posted 2002-06-24 10:19 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS! (i love getting to say that )

great poem
strong message
keep posting!

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-24 10:22 PM




(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a fabulous debut that shines with a powerful urgent message, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! Ooohhhhh...and please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-24-2002 10:22 PM).]

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
3 posted 2002-06-24 10:28 PM


Sheesh..at least you're sorry...

Welcome to the venting community!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2002-06-24 10:36 PM


OUCH!!!

btw



Keep venting, I mean writing!!!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

cutiepiesugarbabie
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A Cloud In the Sky
5 posted 2002-06-25 09:08 AM


...bump...

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

RosePetal
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6 posted 2002-06-25 01:30 PM


Welcome to Passions. I have the feeling you will love it here.  Please check your e mail for a special greeting
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-06-25 01:50 PM


Welcome to Passions.  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

paladin
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8 posted 2002-06-25 03:09 PM


Welcome to passions.Writing about it is great therapy.

paladin

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