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Rhyming...at a Finer Diner
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Rhyming...at a Finer Diner |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Rhyming...at a Finer Diner By Larry Chadwick It was a simple and pleasant meal, Yet cause for my little brother’s consternation. We were simply sharing the food, When he was troubled by the conversation. Mom was serving burgers for supper, And Dad said, “Pass me a bun, son.” Complying, he immediately fell silent, Not partaking, it appeared he might be done. But finally the light came on in him, And he appeared to be quite happy. Waiting for the time to be just right, He proudly said, “Please pass me a paddy, daddy!” June 24, 2002 My brother at twelve Show you care to those you love...today. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-25-2002 12:46 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, that is so sweet, sweet friend, your brother must have felt so proud saying that and being your loving brother too forever! (big hugggssssss) This is alovely reflection of your dearest memories, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s nice memories |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is delightful and delicious and d’lovely, utterly utterly perfect poetry, a slice of life displayed in it’s reality and it’s wonderful. I love it love it love it utterly.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Glad he didn't ask for a sucker!!  |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
cute poem there Larry, ....And Balladeer, you knock my socks off!!! Sherry |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, It was a memorable moment indeed. Brought such humor to a quiet table.  M, Thanks. I find myself searching for those these days. Mushy, Thanks dear friend. A pleasure. 'deer, ROTFLMBO Too dang witty. I like that about you. That raise some eye brows in my family for sure! Sherry, Ain't he a clever 'deer? Thanks. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
OM that was funny! That was the funniest poem and one of my faves! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Love the family mealtime banter. May we have more, please. Shenachie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kellie, Thanks for sharing the grin, friend. Schenachie, Seconds? Are you saving room for dessert? Thanks. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cute little boy. Kinda like you Sandra |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, SHerry.....  Larry, I hope there was a smile on the faces of those raised eyebrows! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra,  Thanks...I liked that. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very cute and lighthearted, Larry...  ~ glad to see you back hugsLyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, Thanks and me too! Show you care to those you love...today. |
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