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Wings Of Time Remembered
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Wings Of Time Remembered |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The cool of air’s breath on wings of time remembered. Flowing through the channel of my soul. Stirring.... bringing to life that which lay still, lifeless, to the sound of dawn breaking slowly. A kiss of softness lingering on lips of desire, leaving the taste of longing. Shuddering..... as a feather’s trace trails in swirls of imagine effortlessly. Still.... Once again in slumber as light blends into the sky of night before the next breath of dawn. When your breath is mine... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a wonderful line-Wings of Time Remembered. It flows perfectly. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, thanx...you write some fairly awesome flowing poetry too... Which I enjoy as well... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too love that metaphor to signify silky fleeting thoughts that come and go through whispers, sweet friend, this is escellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The cool of air’s breath on wings of time remembered. Flowing through the channel of my soul. -------------------------------------- *soft sigh*....smooth as silk Barry. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "Flowing through the channel of my soul." and "When your breath is mine..." very lovely thought. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah my friend, thanx again....Got that waterhose going? Nancy....Hugs back...Yes, smooth, that was my intention...I tried to make it flow very light...thanx... Martie...Thanx dear lady, Yes, I liked those two lines also...my favorites of the piece.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart and bringer of the mornings light I had to seek this out, the pages of Passions so need this uplifting and beautiful lilting song of wonder. Your writing is so moving so beautiful that I’m left awed not knowing what to say. Absolutely excellent writing and you know I love this utterly utterly utterly You know I simply had to reply to this, this is so rare and precious a ray of loves light to shine through when the night seems to stay too long. I love it utterly utterly utterly. YOU are a superb writer I adore this, I still say you know that you are just too too good, I’m going to have to strike back, in fact I already have…………..You'll see, watch your back darling heart........ I'm coming   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy... Darling girl, you know this boy, who is far beyond being one....IS READY FREDDIE!!! So, go for it...I be a waitin'! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Magnus~ The light, sensuous flow of this was wonderful. Your poetry is always a delight to read, thank you so much for sharing it.  It is truly beautiful. *Krista Knutson* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Magnus, this is absolutely precious... A treasure2keep in my library... Thanx4sharing... *~coco~* |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is romantic !! mycafe |
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