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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2002-06-24 05:37 PM

Let us not in our haste hurry dawn,
there is much to explore in this night.
Take my hand there a bright future yawns
on the verge of discovering, flight.

In the pure chance this moment will bring
us together with that from afar,
swing us low, oh sweet chariot, sing
of the sun, and the moon, and the stars.

Let ethereal blend with what's real,
as we lie in our lovers' embrace.
In the warmth of discovery feel,
that perhaps we've at last found our place.

As two notes in celestial song,
let time guide us to where we belong.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-06-24 07:08 PM

Like this...James

Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-06-24 07:14 PM

so farmiliar, although a memory.

this is a beautiful piece.

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

3 posted 2002-06-24 11:04 PM

James,
Thank you , glad you liked. This was a spinoff from the workshop this month. I posted one poem in anapestic trimeter there ( after many failed attempts ) and thought I would try another.
Doc

Krishankins,
Thank you. As I said above , this is my second attempt at this form (which seems to have a unique flow to it). Thanks again.
Doc

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-06-24 11:41 PM

Well, I've seen both attempts and they are both flawless. It agrees with you very well, doc....and vice versa

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2002-06-24 11:45 PM

Let ethereal blend with what's real,
as we lie in our lovers' embrace.
In the warmth of discovery feel,
that perhaps we've at last found our place

Oh this is sooooo beautiful...
Nicely penned DocPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

6 posted 2002-06-25 06:18 AM

Balladeer,
Thanks. Nan's class is agreat place to get an education ( and have some fun).
Doc

Coco,
Thank you very much. Two weeks ago I wouldn't have known a trimeter from a parking meter without the help of Balladeer
and Nan. That's what makes this such a great place.
Doc

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