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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-06-24 04:40 PM



best thing since pen and paper w/
lines to write on (typing this electron
icly) / positively charged
an gnat omy
once brutish words hang lifeless from purple lips
missing brainwave transference as virgin believes
(70) sex has to be better than this
new borns daily test these words or have them tested on them
eager hands try stuff them wide as crumbs
nestle in the folds of their clothes. hungry
toddlers need not
so often cry for their mothers. the blame
is shifted to soSIGHity as the process
feeds on the deeper folds of adolescence
my crumb has collected sediment from
the drOWNing and i am an accumulated cloud
of hive minded individualistic putty with free thinking
meanders threatening ox bow lake
seclusion so clues you in so closed you in

the constant train-track (no what your’ gonna say wear does this fit in)
harmony soothes me

bed lamb

little golden IFshies don’t just nibble at my toes

devOUR

a man came and asked for the shirt
off my back

i gave it to him - pardoned the mess

gGo to bed lamb
gGgo to bed lamb

goto 70

go to bed  

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-24-2002 05:00 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-06-25 12:10 PM


???
This IS way out.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-06-25 04:06 PM



Ow.  Ok, then, I'll be back to read when it doesn't hurt...

Sven
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3 posted 2002-06-25 04:33 PM


*ding*

4th floor. . . kitchen supplies, housewares, and postmodern philosophy. . .

great work walt. . . I love every word of it. . .

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elisaseyes
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fort worth texas
4 posted 2002-06-29 08:53 PM


Back in town to read my man's work...

wierd but good

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-06-29 09:16 PM


WOW,
I found this all fascinating particularly the anatomy, but I didn't understand the (70). please explain!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 2002-06-29 09:26 PM


its a line of program

at the end the line says:

goto 70

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