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TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

0 posted 2002-06-24 04:39 PM

tonight, I speak to you in words of love
words that you have longed to hear with
your own ears
words from a heart that has long sought
to be with you
a heart that you have held in your hands

tonight, I touch your face with hands of love
a touch that you have waited to feel for
what seems an eternity
a touch from a soul that has needed to feel
your skin against its own
a touch that now holds you in its hands

tonight, there is only us My Love, you and I
the world goes on without us for at least
a few unnamed moments
we hide here now, lost in one another's arms
not caring if we're ever found
for we have found this
our love,
our light

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-06-24 05:10 PM

Fabulous...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-06-24 05:11 PM

...Beautiful!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-06-25 12:10 PM

I do believe that this is beautiful. I'm loving the story so far.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-06-25 12:29 PM

Bravo! Excellent work. ThisDiamond

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-06-25 01:05 AM

Awesome! I love the line about skin touching its own skin .... (paraphrase)

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

6 posted 2002-06-25 01:42 AM

...LOVELY....

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2002-07-02 11:47 AM

a beautiful poem - it evokes wonderful reflections - thanks - Paul

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-07-02 11:51 AM

stunning write. fabulous.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-10-02 10:53 PM

Hmm... I seem to have been to this poem before.

And it's still beautiful reading and passion.

Keep goin'!

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