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Ryan2801
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since 2002-06-23
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0 posted 2002-06-24 04:08 PM



A Farewell Wish

I was young when you left
But how I wish you were still here
As I miss your guidance and experience
Through these times I struggle
I miss our walks
I miss our chats
But most of all
I miss that flame within your heart
That kept me safe and warm

My memories are few
The details are short
I ask those close to I
But little response I get
All I have are my beliefs
And vague memories
Off our time together

If I got that wish I desired
It would be for you to return
But not for I
Yes, I do miss our time together
For little we were given
We were deprived
But saying this
There is one less fortunate than I
As she was given no time
Nor memories off you

So if I were a selfish man
Yes I would wish for I
I would wish for us to reunite
But my heart goes out
To that young lady
Less fortunate than I

You may be lost now
To the world
But you live forever
Within my heart
And your spirit
Will never die within me
I feel you beside me
In my darkest hour
You are my guiding star
You are my guardian angel
So until that day comes
That we reunite
I bid you farewell.

© Copyright 2002 Ryan2801 - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2002-06-24 04:11 PM


Ryan welcome to passions, and I am so glad to have you here with us.
You already know how I like this one, words written straith from your heart. I know that you will feel comfortable in these circle of friendship.

Im looking forward to read more from you.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

[This message has been edited by Charisma (06-24-2002 04:15 PM).]

Ryan2801
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2 posted 2002-06-24 04:18 PM


Thank you Charisma for your kind comments and i look forward to my time with all you's, i just hope others like my 1st piece of work as much as you did and that i can continue making progress and providing all within with intresting reading. Lastly i believe i owe you 1 more big Thank You as you are my friend that persuaded me to try this and for that i am truely grateful. Ryan2801 xxxxx.
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3 posted 2002-06-24 04:53 PM


Welcome to Passions.   I look forward to more or your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-06-24 05:02 PM


Ryan,
Welcome to Passions friend. I liked this post and look forward to many more from you.

Be well
Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-06-24 05:09 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS, RYAN!!
Enjoyed so much your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-06-24 05:15 PM




YAY!!! Oh Ryan, this is a sad but beautiful debut, sweet friend, I wish you the best love and hope to follow, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ryan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssssss) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Oooohhhhh...and please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upo you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-06-24 05:25 PM



Welcome to Passions, Ryan.  I, myself, will look forward to reading more of your poetry.  It seems to be bent toward the insightful thinker, and I like that.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Ryan2801
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8 posted 2002-06-24 07:50 PM


Thank You all for your kind and wonderful words, I am glad you's all liked my 1st piece and look forward to supplying you's all with more off my work. Also i would like to thank you's all for another reason which is for taking me in and making me feel so welcome within, that in itself has made me feel settled and encouraged.I would like to send a special thanks to Mistletoe Angel and Sunshine for their wonderful greeting cards, i appreciate this welcome more than words can express. Ryan mwah xxxxx.
Ryan2801
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since 2002-06-23
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9 posted 2002-06-24 08:05 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful and kind comments on my 1st piece off work and i look forward to supplying many more poems and reading lots off yours.Also i would like to thank you's all for making me feel so welcome, which as truely help settle and encourage me.A special thanks to Mistletoe Angel and Sunshine for those wonderful greetings cards i recieved they are much appreicated.Ryan2801 mwah xxxxx.
BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2002-06-25 11:25 PM


It sounds like you've made your peace.
I hope so anyway....I enjoyed your poetic farewell very much.  Nicely said and done.

darkling
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11 posted 2002-06-25 11:32 PM


what a wonderful start to a (hopefully) long succession of wonderful words. I hope to rea more of your writing in the near future.

its amazing what one single word can do.

Lone Wolf
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12 posted 2002-06-25 11:35 PM


Wonderful debut, Ryan.  Very nice work.  Welcome to Passions.  

LW

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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