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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-06-24 12:11 PM


I'm watching you move
each sensual step closer
to melt in my arms
~*~
sink into my arms
lift your chin to offer lips
tasting your sweetness
~*~
my ears hear your sighs
my heart melts upon your touch
I am yours my love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-24 12:13 PM



'Loper's back...about time!  
Welcome home, Texas....

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2 posted 2002-06-24 12:14 PM


mmmmmelting....

you are so good at this, you make my thoughts wander...
AND wonder!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-24 12:22 PM


your fingers trace me
as your eyes drink in my curves
you ask without words.
*I am so glad you're back!*

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4 posted 2002-06-24 12:44 PM


Bob darling boy welcome back I’ve missed you, your lines have a way of wafting over my heart like a song that I remember but feel is new. The familiarity of trust but the freshness of unique, do I love this you know I utterly utterly do. There is within your writing something superior, something that makes it finer and better crafted that makes it incredibly special. Yessssss it’s superb and I adore it

Truly this is exceptional I love it utterly utterly.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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5 posted 2002-06-24 12:46 PM


Sunshine ~
At least for a week, huh?

serenity ~
Hmmmmmmmmmmelting?  Thanx

Nancy Lee ~
Thank you for the wonderful response piece
Howse Chris?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Interloper
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6 posted 2002-06-24 12:49 PM


Magnificent Marsha ~
You DO know how to make me feel soooooooooo good

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-06-24 01:00 PM


You just get more romantic every day. Wow, this is beautiful.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-06-24 01:29 PM


I love this!!! It's so beautiful....and sweet...and romantic...and perfect..*sigh* I loved it!

   Tai

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9 posted 2002-06-24 02:38 PM


InterLoper~
Smiles here ....
So gently you seduce ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2002-06-24 02:38 PM


whoooohoooooo do I love these sighs ... oh yesssss I do..... ooops think im swooning here

Charisma

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11 posted 2002-06-24 02:59 PM


Sandra ~
Really?  Well, I can't wait for next year, then

LilTai ~
I think your first visit to my work.  Welcome and thank you for a most heart melting reply

Marge ~
Are you smiling because I seduce or as I seduce?


Charisma ~
W8 ... I'll catch you, darlin'  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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12 posted 2002-06-24 03:37 PM


Hi Interloper

You write romance well....such sensual love words here, I enjoyed reading!

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13 posted 2002-06-24 04:03 PM


Martie ~
Thanks for the read and the wonderful words

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-06-24 05:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sprinkled with such sweetness and sugar-coated with such smiles! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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15 posted 2002-06-24 05:51 PM


Noah ~
What would I do without your smiles?  I don't want to find out
Thank you, friend.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-06-24 09:58 PM


oh how sooooooooo tender and precious this gem is Interloper it IS soooooooooo soooooooo sweeeeeeeet!
Exquisite writing...
SmilesNhugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

devina
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Cali
17 posted 2002-06-24 10:30 PM


You do sensual soo good...

We need to see more of this!!!

*I do believe that spring has brought *love into the air* at PIP...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
18 posted 2002-06-24 10:46 PM


Love the angle of her chin....
Your poetry is always so tightly knitted.
Really nice~

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2002-06-25 05:10 AM


Really like the title...and the content...James
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20 posted 2002-06-25 05:18 AM


LOPER!!!!

This is great as usual!!!  Short and sweet!!

Texans unite.. lol..

Take care and keep wirting that good stuff for me to read..

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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21 posted 2002-06-25 10:52 AM


Coco ~
Hellllllllo, girl   it is so good to see you back in my replies.  I miss you.

devina ~
Thank you so very much.  Since I do almost nothing but "sensual" writes your request will not be hard to fill

BluesSeranade ~
Who told you I knitted?  Wait 'til I get my hands on 'em.  It was probably Sven or Bob!  They both teach knitting and crocheting on the internet.  Ov corse, it could have been Balladeer ... we were in the same class together.

James ~
I'm glad you liked it my friend

Ladycat ~
Let's hear it for the Lone Star poets!  Thanx for the 1derful reply

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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