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The Next Generation Poet
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The Next Generation Poet |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Something moved so small that it was monumental In the slight twitch the world is changed forever In forces beyond believe the miracle came forward The beginning of the next generation is upon us From the struggle in live to open eyes To the wailing determination to announce an arrival The nurturing will take a being forward In the forces that determine their destiny In an reaffirmation of teacher’s instructions The mountain will be climbed and conquered In failings due to reality lessons, humility will be learned In bruises of such pain, the scars will always remain Something moved today so small it mattered In a dream of visualization, the senses awoke Seeking the miracle of the inner conscience In such meditation the words spoke dynamically Words of grandeur blessed in such depth Creating new worlds in expanding universes In magic that magnetized in hypnotic trances Sending emotions of readers on roller coaster rides In such a gentle manner the master will lay waste To the hypocrisy of individuals claiming superiority For the poet's words will hold the hands of the masses Seeking the bond within themselves In an union so special the heavens rained true A spousal betrothal joined two fairy tales And the purity of creativity blossomed Then something moved so small that it was monumental (May you be blessed with your special poet.) Email me if at davelyoung1@hotmail.com D.Lester Young (06/23/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012 [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (06-24-2002 12:14 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I kow just what you mean and the world is much more difficult than ever before to live through for todays youth such as me, and now I just want to approach the world and write on and try to decipher what has suppressed all! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, this is brilliant stuff, This is the best poem I've read in weeks; And I've read some great poems . You have so much depth and yet it's so great to read . I loved it . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A unique write...worthy of re-reading several times to take in the flavorful nuances entwined... |
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