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Open Poetry #21

Commuting Over You

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-06-24 03:12 AM

Memories beneath my drawbridge love
Flow in colored sighs
A toll of sorrow's treasure
My coin, a soft goodbye

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2002-06-24 07:16 AM

ah how beautiful said, like it a lot

((hugs))
Charisma

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2002-06-24 09:00 AM

I love the ringing tone you leave behind with this!!

Great portrayal of goodbye...

take care Krish!
~Devina

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-06-24 09:30 AM

A toll of sorrow's treasure....

This was sadly beautiful~

Enjoyed it very much.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

4 posted 2002-06-24 10:28 AM

I've never read a good small poem before... (Well, small yes, but not mini.) How did you DO that??? It works so well!

Feel my angsty reachiness!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-24 06:27 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is sooooo sadly beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you ad I hope now you have thrown another coin off the bridge and have had your wish granted for a new special love to take your hand! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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