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dreams of shangri-la |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Edged along the cliff in dreamscapes I am captured a fortress high above the hills remote in my imagination the queen of my own castle adorns a crooked crown. Near and dear perfection deflects a freedom from all fault a trail through the meadows lies a secret hideaway that leads so faraway from home. Basking in my dreams I gaze across the sea cradled in the setting sun cast out among the stars where everything is set aside save a place for you. Skimming through the water kicking up a splash floating as I glide slipping from the pool privately retreating through the clearing of my mind. In the shade of my cabana I nip and nibble from the sweetness forbidden is the fruit nourishing my needs a la luncheon Shangri-La upon your passion that I feed. Cooled by the breezes wrapping all around me I hear the silence of your footsteps on granite stones that echo I long to see you there and breathe you deeply in the air. Roses from my garden cut and placed in every window along the breezeway down the halls winding through the passageways where I can bare it all. I linger there anticipating in the twilight gleaming graced glowing in the candle light a shadowed silhouette in dreams of Shangri-La. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-24-2002 02:51 AM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Shangri-la indeed! Very vivid mental picture you have painted for the dear reader (moi). I like. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah Shangri-La.....wonderful image you penned here....well done  Charisma |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Krishankins~ Thank you for the (moi) glad you enjoyed the mental images.  Charisma~ My imagination tends to work over time~ thanks for reading. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think that I could like that place...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bluezy..so you are going down to malibu? (grin) this was so cool, sexy and a place from fantasy isle...dug it babe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lori, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you write, you take us on a wonderful cruise into Shangri-La! (kiss on cheek) This is magnificent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thak you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
James~ In my dreams it's nicer than it seems. I frequent the place a lot. Thank you~ Dark Stranger~ I got lost in the flow, but my vision remains the same. I guess it's what you make it. Thanks Noah~ It's a pleasure cruise indeed...thank you for that thought!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thanks for sharing your day dream. I loved it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
in my dreams! Thanks Interloper~ |
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