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When Different is Right
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When Different is Right |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When Different is Right A thought held back, a breath in wait A stone unturned, an unsealed fate Now pause, the very thought of this Is passion gone, if less the kiss? It hurts the soul, a loveless time All for want of spoken rhyme The heart, it beats, it thumps along But in no way carries his song He’s hitched up, certain, ever for life To a singing, dancing, loving wife He moves along, a spokeless wheel He hides too deep the feel of real She exudes a charm, a brilliant gleam He pinches his arm, she is that dream Like oil and water, or fire and ice One might think they should have thought twice But his one charm? He lets her Be She chose just right, her smile to see. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, then I would say even with all those differences.... The pure joy of him letting her "Be" who she wants to, it is worth it... Well done, much enjoyed, and thoroughly understood. ~Hugs~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (06-23-2002 08:51 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh Karilea, I find in most cases for difference to be such a saddening thing in our world, to see things we grew up a s a child forsaken and left behind and shoving new things in the face as we speak, but yet, simple pleasures like a kiss are changes that are so delightful! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A song she carries in heart pure in joy of that which is for sure A smile so bright and nice to see A smile of heart, of destiny To write the soul and so much more with the blessing of then explore To write the rhyme a lifelong dream upon the flow of crystal stream Now you got me going.... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
They are just so right for each other, they are doing fine ! Lovely poem mycafe |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The peaceful charm of this poem lies in an artist’s heart. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Excellent writing ... and when you ponder a while ... not really so unusual At least compairing to many of the couples I know |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I like the flow and what a wonderful writing, just love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If that's all she needs, then she is in hog heaven Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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