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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-06-23 09:48 AM



On A Blanket For Two, Neath The Moonlight

                                 

Lying on a blanket for two 'neath the silver moonlight
is there any wonder why I love everything you do?
Beautiful summer nights wrapped in your arms
no place I'd rather be than here with you.
Through the silence of this starlit night
nature beheld the love we did impart
and the only thing that was heard
was the beating of our hearts.



for you Bill, all my love, with all my heart


I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)



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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-23 09:54 AM


Gentle Spirit
A lovely write, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2002-06-23 09:55 AM


What a wonderful evening this is. And a beautiful poem to honor it.
Lucky you if you lived this one.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-06-23 10:01 AM


Sey, thanks hon, appreciate you.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-06-23 10:03 AM


Sandra, last night was just beautiful,
and the inspiration was just wonderful!!   He is the greatest muse I have ever had, not to mention the love of my life.  *s*

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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5 posted 2002-06-23 12:07 PM


GentleSpirit~
Everything about this write is beautiful~
Knowing it is a real from your heart makes it even lovelier~

Happy looks soooooo good in your ink~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2002-06-23 12:19 PM


Donna, this is very beautifully and filled with so much love....
Wonderful dear poetess!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2002-06-23 01:39 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh Dona, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love your new picture too, it is so great to see your face, the one who writes all these gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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