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Kitty**
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0 posted 2002-06-22 11:28 PM




Another Saturday Night, like all the rest.
No one comes to my rescue.
And wouldn't you know, I'm looking my best,
and wanting someone, to think so too.
There's no one to see, the silk I have on,
how it glitters in the pale moonlight.
And the breathing I hear is only my own,
and my arms, are holding me tight.

I pretend that someone, really loves me.
And will love me, till the end of time.
I ignore the fact, I've been told,that I'm loved,
but it has always been just a line.
Love for a night has no meaning,
if tomorrow is not in the plan.
So that is why I am alone tonight,
because I know not such a man.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-06-22 11:31 PM


You speak much truth...

If only us guys would ... well...  I think
you have already said it just fine.  I hope
that you find such a man..  

Kitty**
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2 posted 2002-06-22 11:36 PM


Thank you Magnus !! There really are some good guys out there, it's just they haven't come my way or all the good ones are taken.

Thanks for reading!!

Kitty


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

[This message has been edited by Kitty** (06-22-2002 11:38 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-06-26 05:13 AM


don't feel bad honey, I don't know one either :-)
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4 posted 2002-06-26 06:20 AM


Love for a night has no meaning,
if tomorrow is not in the plan.

So that is why I am alone tonight,
because I know not such a man

Well done, with so much truth in the written
words. Here's hoping you find one soon.  *s*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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5 posted 2002-06-26 06:23 AM


Like this...James
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6 posted 2002-06-26 09:06 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kitty, I am so very sorry you feel so lonely, sweet friend, wonderful things come to those who wish for them and I know with all my heart you will find a love that can feel for you and understand and compassionately reach out to you when you need a shoulder to cry over and be there for you when you need to talk! (sigh) It will come, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kitty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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