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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-06-22 11:01 PM

I wrote a poem no one read,
I wonder if perhaps I'm dead,
Maybe I'm just dull and trite,
Or is it simply I can't write?

I try to pen heartfelt romance,
I've even penned of sensual dance,
On occasion, I have been punny,
I will concede, I'm seldom funny.

One lone person who read my work,
Now she thinks that I'm a jerk,
One faithful reader I enjoyed,
And now she's left, I am destroyed.

My unread ode, my poetic bomb,
Won't you come back, please, won't you Mom?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-06-22 11:04 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Tim, this is so very sad, sweet friend, first of all my heart goes out to you and missing your mom, I know deep down with all my heart that she will always love you and never forget you and always be your #1 fan! Secodly, I am sorry if I have missed some of your poems in the past, while sometimes I may not have commeted to your poems, know that we always read them and if we just had more time we would comment to every single one! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) You have many fans and friends, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!