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kellinjar
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2002-06-22 04:54 PM


I love the light on your face
all my pain and worries it does erase
to see your smile light up
reinforces and fills my cup
with the sweet nectar of joy
makes my life something to enjoy
I drink of this cup deep
it makes my heart leap
up above, up high
soaring around the sky
I love you I cannot deny
I am so stupid I want to cry
for while I drink of this juice
my feelings become abstruse
I cannot understand why I do the things
that I do to you, and why I ruin this love I bring
I wish to understand why I am such a fool
sometimes I feel like such a tool
and I know what to do with myself
lock me in this cell
that is my heart bound tight
i cannot break with all my might
I try so hard day to day
but I cannot find the way
to love you like I should
oh I wish to the powers I could
each day I shall try again
will this be my bane
that will keep you away from me
whatever will be will be
is what they say, but I do not agree
for you can change what will be
with just a bit of effort
I can make this love contort
to something you will enjoy
and then I can give you joy


--
Kellinjar http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

[This message has been edited by kellinjar (06-22-2002 11:45 PM).]

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Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2002-06-22 08:56 PM


NOW this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. Sooooooo beautifully written, I love it. Truly outstanding writing. This is perfect.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-06-22 11:13 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and I know you can make this magic happen too, for you have such a golden heart! (sigh) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matthew, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

kellinjar
Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada
3 posted 2002-06-22 11:49 PM


Thank you for your replies, it means alot to me to see such words

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Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

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