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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2002-06-22 12:33 PM


When True Loves Dream Awakens
~~~


Some undetermined twist
of late
disrupts
a friendly list
of fate
Exchanges friends
to those we hate
when true love's dream
is shaken
~
Sweethearts are tore
forevermore
enlighten please
my need implore
Goodbye to you
my tears ...
ignore
as true love's dream
is shaken
~
I wonder ...
curious or doubt
the day may come
you seek me out
perchance
you'll pine
perhaps
you'll cry
You burned the stage
you said goodbye
Now true love's dream
awakens
~~~

Crash Test Drunk Drivers ... spare the dummies!


© Copyright 2002 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-22 12:40 PM


WOW!!  Powerful write here m'friend!
Hey Rex!!  Where have you been?
Welcome back!
~Sending big hugs up the 401~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-06-22 12:47 PM


what a great piece of writing - I enjoyed it a lot - Paul
Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 2002-06-22 12:47 PM


A virus killed my computer a couple months ago ... although I was able to use a friends unit a couple times, I now have a new shiny one of my own, equipped with Norton Anti-Virus

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2002-06-22 12:58 PM


Happy to see you back, Rex. I love this poem, especially that last sanza. We can only hope they suffer a little, hm?
Sandra

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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-06-22 02:06 PM



'Bout time you got yourself home
where you belong...a good read, long
missed...

Welcome home, Rex...

Marsha
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6 posted 2002-06-22 02:30 PM


Rex darling boy, Oh my where have you been darling boy I have missed your writing so much, NO ONE writes like you do. This is utterly wonderful writing, the sheer beauty of these words caress my soul with delight. Your writing is always divinely painted in brilliant hues of crystal truths. I love it, I really do. The writing is as always perfect.

Excellent writing darling boy utterly utterly excellent,

Now don’t disappear again without warning, I know those invidious viruses are pesky things. I’m glad you’ve now got some protection.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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7 posted 2002-06-22 03:34 PM




YAY!!! (BIG HUGGSSSSSS) Oh Rex, I've missed you so so much, this is such a lovely and romantic comeback, I too wondered where you are and I am so happy your computer is ready again! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
8 posted 2002-06-23 10:26 AM


Goodknight ... Glad you enjoyed it, thanks
~
Sandra ... yes, it's only fair

~
Karilea ... I haven't been writing much lately but I still like to read and I'm glad I'm back on line
~
Thankyou Marsha ... I always try to do the best I can when I write ... and I always love to hear from wonderful people like you

~
Thanks Noah ... it's surprising how much we can miss the use of a computer and internet conection when we lose it for some reason ... but then, it is a conection to friendships as well

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