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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-06-22 12:12 PM


Falling
      
      
think of the rain
how it never ends
always falling
somewhere
ever
transforming
the hardest rock
from crystals into powders
into the tint of a flowing river

think of the tears
how they never end
always falling
someone
is
transforming
the hardened heart
from bitter pain into relief
through fresh rinsed eyes into a clearer view
      
        
      
      

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1 posted 2002-06-22 12:32 PM


smiling at the alchemy of the analogy here, "e"--a favorite theme of mine, as well.

Enjoyed.

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2 posted 2002-06-22 05:12 PM



One never knows what's going to hit bottom...
well done, Krawdad...you wrote a thinker...

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3 posted 2002-06-22 06:08 PM


Krawdad~
Very nicely said~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-06-22 06:24 PM


Wonderfully penned poet sir!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-06-22 07:24 PM




(sigh) Oh E.J, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it comes to show that even while so much pain can penetrate our hearts, it can't killus and we only heal and grow stronger and richer in love! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie
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6 posted 2002-06-22 08:54 PM


Krawdad

Loved the comparison here!

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7 posted 2002-06-22 11:56 PM


so nice to see you writing again...helen
dgvarner
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8 posted 2002-06-23 12:45 PM


someone
is
transforming
the hardened heart
from bitter pain into relief
through fresh rinsed eyes into a clearer view
============================================
very neat...!  i've missed not being here to read all these wonderful poetic words!!

much enjoyed, my friend

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

Krawdad
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9 posted 2002-07-21 01:59 AM


Thanks all for your comments.  Glad you enjoyed.
Syneq
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10 posted 2002-07-29 08:00 PM


Rain and tears are the same release from different source.
Lovely work

~Syneq

Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight.

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