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Yoo-Hoo, Oh Noah !

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Marge Tindal
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Yoo-Hoo, Oh Noah !

~*Marge Tindal*~

For eight days now, we've not seen the sun
Events are looking rather stark
Tell me quickly, Noah ...
Where'd you put the plans for the ARK ?

Another day may be too late
the animals are standing toe to toe
If you don't find those plans right now
they just may have to row !

Come on old man ... get it in gear
The water is rising fast
If you don't get those plans to me
none of us will last~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 06-22-2002 11:50 AM       View Profile for texasrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for texasrose

This is so cute.  I love it!
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2 posted 06-22-2002 11:52 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Marge, ya know I love everything that you write....though.......  This is definately one of my favs, it is so light and fun.  I am glad to see the smile in you today, and that your tears have washed away.  Hugs to you sweet poetess!

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)

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3 posted 06-22-2002 11:59 AM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  I hope you have time to build that ark once you get the plans!  Maybe you'd better have a rowboat handy.  Sorry about all that rain!  We are now out of ours and having a little sunshine.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Supercute, Marge....I had one in the works about the same subject...so I guess I will let it float for a while (pardon the pun)

I have many unfinished poems in the works...so don't feel bad...

I just adore this one....
so very cute.

~ floating hugs

Lyra

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Oh Marge, this is so cute! I hope the rain stops for you soon.
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Rain, rain go away
the Ark is in the lumber stage
although our Margie wants to play
the animals are in a rage
if the rain ain't gone by morn
we may all join the unicorn.

Love the verse Marge, so cute.
Keth


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Cute poem and graphic, Marge. Could you funnel some of that rain out here to the west?
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TexasRose~
Thanks so much~

GentleSpirit~
LOL-ing ... it's definitely a wet day here ... the 'tears' were only poetry in liquid-motion~
I'm happy has a rain-soaked lark !
Thanks sweetie~

BettyLou~
Got that rowboat ready ... think Noah's got a goldmine in those plans ... and he's hidden them~
Thanks sweet friend~

Lyra~
LOL ... heck fire ... let it set sail~
You're probably like me .... could post two new ones a day and not have to write for another year and a half~

SuzieQ~
Well ... I thank you for those wishes~
Just now .... He did splash a rainbow across the evening sky ... so sure hoping He remembers the promise the way I remember it~

Kethry~
Tee-Hee-Hee ... Big giggles here~
Thanks gal~

PoetdeVine~
Be verrrrryyyy careful what you wish for~
This one's a real wench~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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Poor mummy...don't dwown ower there!!!

You member how to do the "no more rain" dance don't ya??? let me come help you out!!!

Very cute~
love ya!!!
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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10 posted 06-22-2002 10:54 PM       View Profile for mycafe   Email mycafe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mycafe

sweet...sweet...sweet...! Animals do complain too !

mycafe
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You're quite the ark-angel, Margie
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very cute!  loved this one miss margie!

you know, as happy as i am to see the rain, its been especially challenging for me.....my brother broke out my rear window just before all the rain started!!! (and i dont have a new window YET!...lol) grrrr...LOL

hugs,g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

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what an adorable poem! You sure have a knack to make people smile!!!
Keep writing.
~Neha
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14 posted 06-23-2002 04:23 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

awwwww Marge to read you is always a pleasure beautiful lady.

Thanks for sharing your beauties with us.

((hugs))
Charisma
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Oh Margie this is delightful and you're just so clever!
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DevinaChild~
This little Cherokee knows how to START the rain ... Grandma forgot to tell me how to STOP it~
Come on down, sugar ... and bring that sweet little babycakes, Caiya~

MyCafe~
Yeah ... the little critters were first ones in line for the rowboat !
Thanks hon~

Balladeer~
LOL-ing ...
now ... whatever were you thinking when you saw the title ...
Tee-Hee !
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

DG~
Oh my ... well ... how hard is it to just spread your brother across the broken window until it's fixed ???
*Hugs* ....

SpiritOfTwilight~
Thank you so much ... they may be grinning, cause it's not raining on their parade !

Charisma~
You sweet lady ... I see it took a FLOOD to get you back here !  Now ... did ya' post a purty ?

ETHome~
LOL ... does 'clever' compute as DESPERATE ?
Well .... happy to report that HE lived up to the promise of the rainbow ... YAHOO !
The sun is actually peeking out this morning~
Whew !  Darned good thing too ... cause Noah never showed up with those plans~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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Ha, ha, I'll trade 'ya weather. Next week's forecase - triple digit heat. Looks like fire weather here.

So, I'd totally trade ya, Marge!

Cor
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ROFLMAO... I love the way nothing can dampen your spirits... or dilute your ink. *G* This is a treasure, Marge. *S*

It seems you're having the weather we had last summer... this year, it's drought. Last year, Allison dumped almost 3 feet of rain on us in 3 days... this year, we've had less than 1/3 of that amount for the entire year... Too much or too little with no moderation... you'd think God had put a manic depressive in charge of the dipper dousing us, hunh? LOL
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19 posted 06-25-2002 11:58 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I think the plans were waylaid in ARKansas by a certain ex-prez of dubious reputation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 08-23-2008 12:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Folks~
Six years since I wrote this one ... and now our area is simply under siege from Tropical Storm Fay~
She has shown no mercy to the State of Florida~

She is STILL dumping her fury on us~

If you are keeping track of her at all, then when you hear Volusia County or DeLand ... that's me~
I am inland 19 miles West of Daytona Beach~

I am more than safe where I am ... but I have friends who are flooded out of their homes~

Please keep them all in your prayers~

My poem was meant to lift spirits after the rains we received way back then ... but the flood-water damage that folks here are experiencing is very not-so-funny~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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