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Sensless Nativity |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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drip, drip dripping from the faucet I hear whenever you are near this is about the time you knock me down but you that I’m not having it go ahead go ahead throw your balls of fire let your flames ignite me I am more powerful than you This is about the time youbring me down Knock me down to the ground But you know that I am not having it I’ll let you just try to make me do something wrong But just know that God is my back up plan So when you make the faucet drip Why don’t you make your sorrow trip Just because you have never been loved If you ask God will love you too Just because you live in fire Doesn’t mean you should not find love Release your hostages Release you loneliness Release me from your grip This is about the time that you knock me down But you forget thatI’m not having it. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
an invitation to look and experience your spirituality - thanks - Paul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Definately you have a giving heart, and much strength that lies within also. Powerful write Kellie. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
If you ask God will love you too Just because you live in fire Doesn’t mean you should not find love Release your hostages Release you loneliness You have captured a lot of spirituality here, Kellie... I love the poem.  ~ spiritual hugsLyra |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Madame Chipmunk- Thank You. this poem is full of untold mystery. For me it goes a lot deeper than the eye can see. It has deep emotion and a cloud hoving from beyond. Its a lonely point of view that Satan is trying to knock me down but God keeps picking me up and keeping him from knocking me down. Gentle Spirit- As I said to Madame Chipmunk Thank You and the explanation is the same. I rfeally got sick of being knocked down. I am just letting everyone know that I really am not having it. Goodknight- Thank You. All of you have been so nice to me. I just wish more people would read all my poetry and respond I am about to publish a book and I need lots of feedback. Thank you. |
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