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In Summer when the sky is blue |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 In Summer, when the sky is blue, I'll sit and write a rhyme for you, And write about my roses here, Those flowers wich I hold so dear Their fragrance flow from nose to nose, Thank God that he has made the rose She lifts her face up to the sky, This beauty caught my searching eye Every Summer she is there, Climbing Shot Silk, a name so fair _______________ [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (06-22-2002 09:08 AM).] |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Tita hi there this is really fine writing, the flow is perfect and the picture perfectly compliments the words. Ideal writing, I shall expect to see lots of pics or you mum Krissy and all the others. Some of us can’t go gallivanting off to Florida some of us have to stay behind and work. I’m not really jealous, and if you believe that you’ll believe I’m a talking pig I just wish I could go too. This is really excellent writing Emma    Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Titia, This poem is as beautiful as the rose. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem, Titia. And, I love the picture. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Ahhhhh ... 'tis the day of roses~ Beautiful dearest poetess~ Just sooooooooooo lovely are your word-pictures~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a wonderful rythm to this poem. You are a rose yourself, Titia...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Titia, I love this rose poem and your rose picture. Also like 'Deer's blooming rose. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend, I love it, you too are a fair rose to this place as Balladeer says, we all love you so much! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful roses and beautiful poem, Titia... a great combination! ~ rosy hugsLyra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful! Is that what the objects mixed in with the roses are, Climbing Shot Silk? They were very intriguing to me, made me think of teasel but I was sure they were softer than teasel. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you all for your lovely replies. Michael, you make me  you sweet guyVas, the rose is called Climbing Shot Silk, the 'objects' you see are the seedbulbs of a clematis. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Your flowers are gorgeous, and so is your poem. Sandra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
What a lovely tribute to Climbing Shot Silk. Beautiful write ! mycafe |
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