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Love Rejected

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 06-22-2002 06:23 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Love Rejected

At various times
we may find
that our love
has been rejected.

It then becomes
our unfortunate task
to make sure
that our love
is redirected.

JamesLee
June22
2002

Yes it happened to me
at various times.
Thank God not recently.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (06-22-2002 06:29 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 06-22-2002 10:57 AM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

James, I have had this very same thing happen to me. I never thought love would be rejected. Sometimes, I think some people just don't know what true love is. That is why they reject it.
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thanks for the powerful window on experiences of life and how we struggle through them - Paul
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Excellent piece, James. Good idea, too.
Sandra
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4 posted 06-22-2002 01:39 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

I love the rhyme here-and the idea.

Nan

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(sigh) Oh James, I too know these kind of circumstances and I know as long as you have the courage to, your love will always be heading in the right direction at all of lifes intersections! (big huggssssss) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Woo-Hoo!  Let's hear it for "redirection".  Married for the second time to who should have been my "first and only".     Love your writing here!  

~SM
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James

Wise words in your poem, and so true.  Enjoyed!
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Hello James

I'm sure all of us can relate to this.  Sometimes we are left asking "why?".

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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Loved this pondering piece of you James...

we've all been there, done that (as you well KNOW I have over the years!! rofl)

enjoyed this!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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10 posted 06-23-2002 05:18 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

like it a lot James!!

((hugs))
Charisma

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YEA JAMES!!!  Lets here it for starting over again and gettin gon with life and finding love..  YEA!!!

I really enjoyed that piece.

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

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Very true, well said.

SimplyGold
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enjoy
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You say so much..
in so few words...
Glad to hear it isn't now.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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I'm glad to hear it isn't now either. I think we have all had our love rejected. It's an awful thing. Well I could go on and on about this subject but I'll just say I liked the poem for the truth it spoke.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

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Very wise words Sir James.....much truth
within....Mahalo!
JamesMichael
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17 posted 06-27-2003 05:52 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

May I offer a toast as we all share a glass of delicious wine.   I hope all that have lost a love will find a new love...love and all the beautiful things it has to offer is waiting for our embrace...James
 
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