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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-06-22 03:19 AM


Higher than heaven
floating up above the world
While in your presence
You're an angel to this girl
My heaven is in your eyes...


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1 posted 2002-06-22 03:36 AM




(kisses) Awwwwwwww, I cried a tear reading this, you always make me so very happy! (kiss) You are heaven to me and you will always be the girl of my dreams, if we meet it will be like seeing heaven, you, in front of my very eyes! (kisses) I sure hope we get too, I LOVE YOU!!! (kisses) Now, GO TO BED AND DREAM THE SWEETEST DREAMS!!! (kisses)



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Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-06-22 01:34 PM


What a sweet tanka. Well done.

Nan

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3 posted 2002-06-22 01:39 PM


RosePetal
I would say the arrow hit its mark.

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4 posted 2002-06-22 03:00 PM


Rosey Posy darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? girl? Hmmm?

Always your writing is wonderful and this is superb darling girl


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Anvrill
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5 posted 2002-06-22 03:04 PM


Beautiful.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-06-22 03:43 PM


It is nice to have a heaven on earth...James
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7 posted 2002-06-22 05:15 PM


Beautiful Tanka sweetie!
~Hugs from your sidekick!~

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8 posted 2002-06-22 06:06 PM


RosePetal~
Very nice Tanka thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2002-06-22 06:18 PM


enjoy your read
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10 posted 2002-06-23 04:51 AM


Beautiful tanka, love it!!

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2002-06-23 12:55 PM


What a wonderful vision you have RP~
Delicate and dreamy and so full of love!

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12 posted 2002-06-23 07:55 PM


Joanna,  I think you hit the ten ring with
that one...

RosePetal
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13 posted 2002-06-24 02:16 PM


Thank You for your kind replies, they mean so much
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