Hearts On Fire (20 or less first attempt)

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Open Poetry #21

Hearts On Fire (20 or less first attempt)

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-21 07:31 PM

sensual touch
explore lovers face
eyes meet
as fingers interlace

passion burns
hearts on fire
bodies wanting
indulge in desire

* * * * *

I have never done a 20 or less before and was inspired by Barry (Magnus)

Suetang

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-21 07:32 PM

Very passionate

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-21 07:51 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write such beautifully breathtaking poems and this proves you are wonderful with brevity as well! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-06-21 07:51 PM

lots of passion Sue and the 20 or less really worked - Paul

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