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sleep with love |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I’d just like to fall asleep head pressed against your strong heartbeat… I’d like to measure affection’s time within your arms within my mind Tranquil peace~ at tender touch soothing smoothing sleep with love… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Beautifully writtenCold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always feel his gentle heartbeat of love and forever smile with the afterglow of true love, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful, soft and lovely. Well done Devina. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
devina - wonderful poem - touching - lovely - inviting - just loved it - Paul |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
again with such sweet words...girl you are working my heart muscle. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
tl23- ty for the beautiful lady!!! MA- well forever is the plan hun...  Gentle Spirit- guess I'm in THAT mood this weekend...ty Paul- your words are always welcome sweet man!! Rob- glad to know I'm workin something these days...ROFL Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As soft as cotton and smooth as silk is your way of saying just what you are looking for...nicely done.. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Magnus- you are so sweet man...thank you for your purdy words... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I think any man's heartbeat would be strong with your head resting on it....very nicely done  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned! Soft and gentle as a lullabye. ~Hugs~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is a comfort zone indeed! Warm and cozy stuff Devina~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Mopey likes it! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww like this loving piece a lot!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Michael- and you always were a charmer sweets...but I AM guilty of enjoyin it!!! *big grins* Enchantress- oh sweet lady...I thnak you deeply!!! Just be glad I'm not trying to *sing* it to ya!!! rofl BluesSerenade- you're words are always so comforting dear..ty Mopey- as well you should...since the love bug has bit you in the ***...  ty MikeCharisma- glad you enjoyed...more mushy stuff to come...EEGADS!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
devina this is one of your best...sweet dreams...James |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
So relaxing. I love that feeling. You can't have a better unless you are dancing in the rain that is. Thank you for the wonderful read. I think that I will go to bed now and listen to the heartbeat.. Goodnight Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very romantic work sweets...yanno, it reminds me of what Balladeer told me once...his wife always sleeps while they're making love..... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I would like this too. Well done. Sandra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That sounds delightful. *S* I like this, devina. *S* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now. . . I like this. . . yes. . . very much. . . wonderful hon. . . really. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
James- I knew you of all people would appreciate this one...ty Ladycat- Glad I could make an impression on you sweetie!!! And dancing in the rain would be my next choice as well!! Toerag- ROFL...he's gonna get you for that one...you know that right??? Sandra- happy that we agree...shows good taste...  suthern-So good to see you here lady!!! thank you... John- and how did I know??? hugs sweetie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Devina, you have written this beautifully. |
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