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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-06-21 05:10 PM


I keep making on mistake after another
I push away all the guys I ever loved
I am meant to be a loner
That is my destiny
My road in life
To be alone forever
I just figured out I am too possesive to
I should have figured it out earlier
Before I ruined yet another relationship
But sometimes you learn the hard way
I must say
That way you have learned what not to do
Before you move on

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2002-06-21 09:09 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to your life in the present, for we all make mistakes but we also all are destined to someone and I know you will always have true love close to your heart! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-06-22 11:58 AM


With maturity comes trust,  with trust comes
relationships...with understanding comes
a lasting bond...   A loner?  Not really...
Just a young woman trying to sort through
all there is about the feelings of love and
learning...a little bit at a time...

Hugs to you...you will get there...
TAKES TIME..

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-06-22 12:14 PM


Everyone makes those mistakes when they're young.  Its all a part of maturing.
Life isn't handed to us as a finished product;  we are all born with the capacity to grow and flourish, but in order to do that...we all have to make mistakes first...
thats how we learn to do what is right for ourselves...and what is right for you, Julie....is probably wrong for someone else and vice-versa...
We all have our own formulas and the whole trick of being happy...is finding the one which works best for you as an individual...
So....each time you lose a boyfriend, just think of it as another learning experience...
eventually you will get it right.  Just don't stop trying because then you'll miss out on lots of fun.
I hope this helped

~ hugs from an old lady to a young one

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-06-22 12:37 PM


I think Lyra said it best of all....Much
wisdom in those words...we all learn our
own ways...and with time,  you will develop
your own that work very well..

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-06-22 01:26 PM


Well, that's the secret isn't it? Moving on? I like this one.

Nan

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6 posted 2002-06-22 01:27 PM


the_loner_23
No advice just liked your write.

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-06-22 02:11 PM


I agree with Lyra! If it wasn't for the mistakes we make, we would never learn anything. I wish for you the best. And, don't settle for anything less than what you really want. "BIG HUGS"
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8 posted 2002-06-22 08:33 PM


Loner darling heart this is wonderful. This is a very special piece from you darling girl, incredible writing full of such depth only the very wise recognise their mistakes you know. I love it, It’s wonderful to see you work absolutely wonderful.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

  

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Zinsser
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9 posted 2002-06-23 11:30 AM


Just live on....   : )
This to shall pass
~~ Connie ~~

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10 posted 2002-06-23 11:35 AM


I realized a long while back that *I* had a habit of pushing guys out of my life... When I figured it out, I got so mad at myself that I intentionally scared them off after that, just to punish myself. Wheeee. Bad road to go down. Stupid mistakes get made and many regrets pile up and up and up. If I hadn't figured out I could do more with my very best friend than just be very best friends, I would probably have no one right now.

Feel my angsty reachiness!

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11 posted 2002-06-23 07:38 PM


enjoy
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