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Take me Away
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Take me Away |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Take me away, I beg you take me now no longer can I live here all alone sweep me into the land where love resides to places magic I have never known. So many dreams of beauty that I have though rarely found-most often tossed aside if you would help me now to get away it would go far to cure the tears I've cried. Take me, within you is the power real to help a lost one find her way again it's not to late to find our life anew though I must wait until your heart says when. Take me, together we can rule the world we two, the mysteries of life unfurled. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this poem a lot.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the need, the longing is so evident in this and you wrote it so wonderfully. Hugs to you hon. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I hope your dream comes true soon, Sandra... in the meantime...I really enjoyed this poem.  ~ dreamy hugsLyra |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very interesting gal...liked it... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sandra...and so full of longing. ~Hugs to you sweet poetess~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Were Thee a gift so rare to keep in treasure lock 'Gainst the stroke of hair on chime of lover's clock To covet Thee beautiful to cherish Thee so grand to the starlight bountiful above this promised land Be careful Sandra, keep writing this longing poetry....and you might get your wish.... meanwhile, I will just give you poetic smiles.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sandra, I hope all of your dreams come true real soon. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Sandra hang in there, I know all your dreams will coe true with all my heart and the prince of your dreas will come take you away like Snow White in her story! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, this will happen, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a longing poem that touched a heart - very very nice - Paul |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I can't imagine that you are really that longing/lonely. You do, however, understand it well, and write of it beautifully. I much enjoyed this one. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You got me cheering for you. Very nice write and I especially liked the way it reads so smoothly. Well done indeed. btw ... to answer your question on my post............YES and it feels good to be back. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hope the light turns green for ya real soon! I always enjoy your writing Sandra~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem is very full of the desire to enjoy life...and all the beautiful things it has to offer...James |
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