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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-06-21 12:35 PM


Three Part Harmony

6

Bass rumbles tires over rails
Pot holed roads over buses sails
Diesel fumes the senses assails

7

Tenor tin cans crash the early morning,
Songs from rushing horns blare their shrill warning
Drumming foot steps into streets are swarming

8

Soprano girls crying out gallon tears
Unable to cope with their mounting fears
Can not comprehend where the future steers

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-06-21 01:16 PM


Enjoyed the song of the city.

Nan

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-06-21 01:21 PM


this is nice.....
I love the city....

Daylily
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3 posted 2002-06-21 03:06 PM


Love the images this brings to mind!
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-06-21 03:07 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-06-21 08:56 PM




(smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, this is a wonderful "unharmonious" harmony from your wonderful heart! (big huggsssssss) City life can indeed be rough, but yo display their feelings and hopes well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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