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LngJhnAg
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0 posted 2002-06-21 11:24 AM



Dear me, Karilea
My kitty kicking urges
You've now inspired

How I wish my cat
Wouldn't bite when I pet her.
Thank goodness for ski gloves.

Thank goodness also
That Lorelei doesn't catch me
When I tickle hard.

'Cat food' has meaning
When the only pet around
Is a hungry dog.

How I wish that cats
Could be more like footballs
With a goalpost near.

Three points or just one,
A worthy goal for Long John
Sudden death overtime.

Its up, long enough....
Will it be good? YES! It is!
Long John wins the game!

Oh oh.... Karilea.
Nowhere to run with my guilt.
My poetry ends.

© Copyright 2002 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2002-06-21 11:32 AM




Long John!  Was your goal
to tickle her funnybone?
Sunshine's laugh glitters

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-06-21 11:41 AM



Long John! Now really,
are not Toe and 'Deer enough
why attack the cat?

My 5-7-5
was totally kitty-less;
retreat! Sir, retreat!

talk no more goal posts
or sudden death shall find you
as guilt on a stick


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3 posted 2002-06-21 01:50 PM


FANTASTIC Long John....
as are the replies.
Excellent 5-7-5's.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2002-06-21 03:19 PM


Wow - Three fantastic replies from three fantastic women!  I knew I was onto something with this kitty-kicking thingie - lol
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5 posted 2002-06-21 03:19 PM


"My poetry ends."

I musta missed something... What poetry??? Where? When did it start?

borrowing some innocent looks from the kitty-kicking master of innocent looks... and pretending this didn't get even one giggle. *G*

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-06-21 03:24 PM


That is funny. I know how cats bite when they don't feel like being messed with.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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7 posted 2002-06-21 09:00 PM


Straight through the middle
We have our deciding
Winner of this game...



(giggles) This is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I have missed reading your works so much, this is another fabulous series! (big huggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet LongJohn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-06-21 09:19 PM


LOL@Suthern!!

Sailor, I love it when you badmouth felines....makes people hate ya!!! Keep up the good work!

Nan
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9 posted 2002-06-21 09:58 PM


LongJohn, Oh LongJohn
KittyKapers give a kick
To Passions' poets..

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