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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Summer I shall wear a summer shift forgetting it's so sheer that a slip would have been required when I stand in the rise of summer sun I shall let my tresses loose where winds can tease my face with strands of gold I shall follow the stream to the cool pond where the water is clear and step in water shall lap at my ankles, then creep up my calves, my dress shall rise upon the water's surface, I shall nymph my way into the liquid then rise clinging to the morning's song for you I shall become summer and wear you well [This message has been edited by Lady In White (06-21-2002 10:01 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wear me well says the knight for in the warm of you I am.. LIW...such a vision your poetry brings to mind....may we all join you in this place.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lady, did it suddenly get warm in here? Very summery poem with great images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Whyte please wait until I get around on this side of you enjoyed the view of this ms |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
WOW! A full length wet tee shirt! woo hoo - errr, excuse me... This was a very sweet poem, Ms. White. Full of innocence. |
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Daylily Junior Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 22USA |
This is a keeper! I love it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ever so lovely write Ms. White... for the summer solstice. Enjoyed, Hugs. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady On a hot first summer day...there's only one thing to do...and you do it so well! Way cool! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"for you I shall become summer and wear you well"   (smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful love poem to ring in this lovely summer solstice! (kiss on cheek) May summers light last through every single season in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the sensuality and lightness of this, Lady in White... You wrote it so well...  ~ summer hugsLyra |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Magnus, you may join me where the poets meet, in soft word and warm retreat... Kethry, warm is in your heart....thank you.... DS, any side will do...thank you.... Long John...all innocent, surely... Daylily, thank you for reading! Enchantress, the solstice brings out true reflections, yes? Martie, come join me in the cool.... Thank you Noah.... Madame Chipmunk, come join the ladies....the water is fine.... |
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