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Aphrodisiac
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Aphrodisiac I thought an aphrodisiac The sacrosanct of what I lack To be that sense of fantasy To taste the tea of ecstasy And rose among the colored lights Danced and kissed away the night. Sand castled on a beach of sand A lover in a dreamers land Gifted from a spirits you Abstracted from the flowers dew Fragile as the mist of morn And held you till the break of dawn. The wonder of a wily wile The product of a lover’s guile The helium of minds alas. The honey of the common mass A phantom twisting into bend The pleasure of a wished for end |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Goodness, chocolate in one read, helium in another... sounds like a floating type of summer day... you are all causing all day smiles here... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy This is perfectly divine poetry, it flows like liquid light, this is the very essence of your soul, distilled into drops of wonder which cascade over my mind. Filling me with utter utter delight. How do you do this? You keep writing such perfect poetic wonders that fill my soul with such sweetness? I feel your writing in the deepest part of my soul darling boy and it’s as always magical. MMMMmmm good morning Seymour so lovely to greet you at the dawn of your day, have a great one. You know I’m going to say that I love this utterly, outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utterly utterly perfect.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sunshine, at least you are still shinning. Out the window it's rain.  Marsha, Good morning sweet lady, You have turned on the light of a very rainy day. Thank you dear  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wickedry in a blender sir, you mix some paints that just taste like they are safe to drink enjoyed it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And a wonderful good morning to you too Sy! Beautiful sunny 90 degrees here today... Love waking up to your poetry! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, I wouldn't mind drinking some of that tea of ectsasy. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I LOVE this, and I want some, too. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I thought an aphrodisiac The sacrosanct of what I lack To be that sense of fantasy To taste the tea of ecstasy And rose among the colored lights Danced and kissed away the night. Sand castled on a beach of sand A lover in a dreamers land Gifted from a spirits you Abstracted from the flowers dew Fragile as the mist of morn And held you till the break of dawn. ====================================== Ahhh Stinkylove you make me smile with your dreamer's wile...there are so many poetically pure phrases and word play in this...so many images done with your gift of subtle and vocabulary kissed with cadence... those verses above are poetry in motion ... your rhymes are my notion potion  Gifted from a spirits you Abstracted from the flowers dew how cool is that line... how cool is the poet that wrote it. *S* *holding up me mug of tea to you* ( you know the flavor of favor )  "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh, look at all the fine poetry I am missing out on when I am at work...(took a meritorious day to just be me) Good Morning Sy....sorry bout the rain... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is delightful, sweet friend, the summer sun alone can be like an aphrodisiac of j to us all and inspire us all to write happy lovely poetry! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much!You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, It has to be potent. Enchantress, Good morning sweet, :squeeze; Keth, Take a wile each day and call me in the morning. Sandra, Same perscription as Keth. JM, Thank you my ethereal love. You hand me roses each morn as I write in the dawn. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You worded aphrodisiac Whenever I come online Your sweet potion I dine Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Well like they say we need the rain. Good morning and thanks for the read. Noah, Thank you for the like. HopeS, Cute reply, thank you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Your wily wile is my poet beguile! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you dear. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is an aphrodisiac to my soul, Sy... I love the way it reads...and I would also like to have some of that potion... How much are you charging for it?  ~ huuuuuggggs!Lyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, for you no charge. |
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