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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-06-21 05:32 AM



we were romantic chocolate
the sun made us fit better
then syrup when warm

we talked about love things
like french fries and chicken
and sloshy noises in post offices

when fresh wax floors meet
new tennis shoes for first dates
you smiled in your voice

I smelled the blue green colors
of velvet lemonade
and frozen merlot in sandlewood glass

with my eyes closed there
you painted your nails
with salt sugar cellophane

I could taste your kiss in my mind
is was warm hand flavors
and fit around my neck

like a never lonely jacket

©Dark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-21 07:26 AM



You've giving a whole new meaning
to one's love for chocolate...
I do believe this should suit
everyone's palatte this Friday morn
and the whole day through

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-06-21 07:51 AM


morning ms shine..happy friday to you, and thanks for the review of my image here
rwood
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3 posted 2002-06-21 08:13 AM


I'm late..hell I don't care..the office can wait..cause I needed this wake up juice..
Good grief, who needs coffee with you around. Hug you hard.

Sincerely,
Reg

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-06-21 08:17 AM


Dang!  What a way to wake up!
~morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-06-21 08:17 AM


Enchantress, good morning ms smile treat, slow hug and a thank you to you


Regina,

since we'z huggin, let's call in well
thanks hon, I appreciate your touch
be late more often..

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-21-2002 08:20 AM).]

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-06-21 09:36 AM


Dark,  this makes the hunger of taste
grow in the glow of morn.  Excellent, sir.

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2002-06-21 09:44 AM


humble thanks mag'amigo...I appreciate you
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-06-21 10:15 AM




(smiles) Awwwww, I love this, sweet friend, it amazes me how the simplest gestures and reactions hold some special meaning in them and it alone can reveal so much, especially in joy! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie
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9 posted 2002-06-21 10:52 AM


Good morning, DS   across rain drops.

This is so yummy!

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2002-06-21 11:14 AM


Noah, thanks sir!!!  you are great to me.


Ms Martie, got rain?  I got fog with soggy undies here....thanks for the wiggle wave, big hug hands back at ya

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2002-06-21 11:14 AM


Did I ever tell you that chocolate is my favorite?  darn you know how to make the smiles..........*w*

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2002-06-21 11:31 AM


GS..thanks Donna for the wave.  Glad you liked it...(waving Hershey bottle at you)


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