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Open Poetry #21

summer soul (copula)

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-06-21 05:13 AM

summer soul
stitch
lost friend
ships made of pape
r
thin wreck
collection

summer soul
stitch
tap(es
tree swing
me dad
dy
from your limb
er
can’t lasti
city
lights befall the crowd
play ball
calls
boys
of want some
her

summer soul
stitch
in time
saves 9
months dead
for not
some are
glad she hear

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-21-2002 05:15 AM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2002-06-21 06:23 AM

Okies..between you and Sven, I'm gaining a great appreciation for this kind of work. Enjoyed the read, Walt. Its strange to think how much you changed your writing on here, but still wonderful.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-06-21 07:57 AM

it's different but I like it, it's a bit like reading with one eye closed and your finger on the enter key.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2002-06-21 11:32 PM

Sort of like an e.e.cummings poem.I liked the rhythm.

paladin

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-06-21 11:33 PM

Like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

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