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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-06-21 03:31 AM



Veiled by green leaved lambency,
it only ached
when I caught the shimmer of your golden hair
from my lofted hideaway.
The fall was merely an afterthought.

© Copyright 2002 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-21 03:37 AM


ouch!!! ahhh women yuh
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2 posted 2002-06-21 05:37 AM


*smiling*

lovely...just lovely.

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3 posted 2002-06-21 06:13 AM


*sigh*
Are you in love..or are you just writing like you are. I love this. I've watched your work do some wonderful growing, Love. Wish we could talk soon to catch up.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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4 posted 2002-06-21 06:33 AM


:::SmiLES & BluSHES::: WaIT...Why Am I Blushing?!?!?!?!?
This was so simple, so cute! So, tell me...Who is she?!? ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-06-21 08:43 AM


Wonderful Philip!!
Enjoyed the thoughts here...*S*
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
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6 posted 2002-06-23 04:59 AM


Delightful indeed!
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