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Awaiting A Bigger Magic
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Awaiting A Bigger Magic |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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There are moments of indignation happening in my heart as I wait here holding (my breath) holding holdingholdingholdingholding I have whispered a moment and it stepped into my soul loveswept and irresistably warm. We're writing another story our realistic fairytale dressed in a cute little moonlight number with one of those slits that blink allowing the silken skin of a forbidden moment to creep into view. We are all my images strewn about on paper passion blown and looping through the air with a zest and taste for what we could become. But... shhh.. lest we squander a lifetime in just one moment indulging too much forgetting that manners are required during the feast of us. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When we become the most important thing in our lives, then love has lost and emptiness is knocking on our door. Very well written. I not only liked the flow of the piece but the format was pleasing as well and of course it tempts the mind to actually engage in some meaningful activity. Much enjoyed. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Quieted too soon, Gone before I found you, I lost you before I could whisper I love... |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
When love becomes the magic, then the spell is always. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Jenn, this is so wonderfully said, sweet friend, and I know with such manners and hope that you will be granted this greater magic and it will be so invicible nothing can make that flame turn blue! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I just love the way you write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Great write. Awesome! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~This is pure magic!~ |
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Ouberon Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 88MA, USA |
A little innoculation of flowers and candlelight is just what is needed to keep the blues away. Keep smiling Jen, but be your own happiness sustaining yourself and bringing it to others, lest you forget if another fails you. *Hugs* |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
"We are all my images strewn about on paper passion blown and looping through the air with a zest and taste for what we could become." How I love these lines ! mycafe |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
... manners are required during the feast of us. ========== I loved this piece and this phrase in particular. Well done, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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