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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-06-21 01:24 AM


You and I share so many memories, for you there's nothing I wouldn't do
I know your heart is hurting, I want to ease away these clouds of blue
Your dad will be okay, the Lord will see him through the night
Though he is physically ill, his soul is basking in God's everlasting light

I know the pain that you feel, that your heart is breaking in two
Just please know I love you my dearest friend, and that I'm always here for you
There is no mountain we can't climb, no ocean is too deep
When you want to talk, we will...in the middle of the night, when we should be fast asleep

When you need that hand to hold, you know mine is always right there
I'll carry with you your pain, you'll never have to wonder if I care
Through good times and bad, you and I have been through so much
When the world is feeling cold..come to me, I'll be here with a loving touch

If it should come to pass, that your Dad's time is up and he must go
On me you will forever be able to count on, this you must know
When the rain starts to pour, and it looks like the storm will never calm down
I'll hold you gently, embracing you in the arms of friendship...I'll chase away your frown

If he should make it though, and continue on another day of life and light
I'll still be around, never far from sight
Praying for you tonight, I shall say prayers to God for you from me
To either let your father stay here and be happy with you, or to let his soul be finally free

Come whatever may, please know I love you more than words can say
You're my best friend and more, and it will be like that for always
When the pain becomes too much to bear, or you just want to have someone near
I'll be there in a heartbeat, so have no fear

Annette I am so sorry about you Dad sweetie.
Just know you are always in my prayers and thoughts
and I love you very much.
~Amy~

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2002-06-21 01:29 AM


that was such a considerate, redeeming piece of writing. whatever bad mood i thought i was in has cleared away for your divine sunshine My hope and contemplations are for all those who have lost or will be losing a close loved one. (i guess that makes all of us!
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2 posted 2002-06-21 10:36 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is such a sad but beautiful write, sweet friend, know that my heart too goes out to your friend and know that the love your friend shares with your dad will always live and he will always guide this special person! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-06-21 10:38 PM


I like your description of a friend. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-06-21 10:46 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is utterly utterly perfect darling girl, such a wonderful gift to give to Annette, and your description of a friend are perfect. She knows your heart is there should she need your comfort. This is wonderful writing well done


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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