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The Pain |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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You are fixin' to leave town in one day Your boyfriend decides to spend one of your last Days together with his friends How is that supposed to make me feel? That is what I say I feel like crap He does this everytime I am fixin' to leave My anger builds up I want to throw up This upsets me so Am I not special? Am I not loved? Sometimes I know not Sometimes I don't feel special I don't feel loved I feel alone I keep telling him I am gonna be gone for 15 days With no communication My sister is such a pest This is such a mess I hope he suffers for the pain I hope he goes insane I hope he knows the hell I go through When he does this to me He says some friends showed up unexpectedly I will be back later I said whatever If I am awake All he says is okay later Man that just ticked me off I hate this I hope he reads this And knows the pain he causes So he can learn this Sometimes he is a real dumb ass     Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
OH My GAwd.... do I ever know how you feel ... I have been in your shoes... not now but a few years ago.... You have every right to be angry at the imbecile.{don't even care if I spelt that right} I would be to furious to speak.... gotta send this link to my mother Alterego she may have some consolation for you too... I suggest you ask yourself what is he good for... is there ANYTHING he does or is that you couldn't do for yourself.... He could and should have told his friends later not you. Now you got me mad too..... Sigh... Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Sherry is right - if he's such a jerk, why do you bother with him? Sometimes, as well, we need to remove things from our lives in order for better things to come in - like making room in the living room by throwing out the old sofa when you're getting a new one (and from my experience with men, the analogy is probably a good one, because most of them only take up room we could better utilize elsewhere in our lives). Considering your earlier poem on being overweight, you maybe need to start "loving" YOURSELF more, and that also means allowing yourself to let go of the things that poison your mind into thinking you're not "worthy" - BECAUSE YOU ARE WORTHY!!! Email me if you want to pursue this further - I've got a lot of good ideas that could be of help to you. Hugs {{{{  }}}}Sheila Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggsssssss) Oh Julie, I'm so sorry about this, sweet friend, that person is obviously very inconsiderate and you don't deserve any time with people like that! (sigh) Never let them hurt you, sweet friend, you are in cgarge of yourself and you are a very loving and compassionate person and sonner or later theyt will regret what they said and wish they could apologize for their misunderstanding! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you should always feel special...but let thoughts of this guy leave your mind...unfortunately there are lots of jerks around though..meeting the right one takes time  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Julie, The poem is as a poem should be. The boyfriend is an assh*le. ~wranx |
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