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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-06-20 10:34 PM



As dawn conceals of sun bleached shores and waters cantillate
A renaissance of tidal jewels upon the waves to scintillate
In languages erotic in a stir of inner fields and streams
Impressions of emotions surging in the arms of potent dreams

While seas evince the powerful unending rise and fall
A vision of the full seen temperaments by one and all
As dawn reveals of shorelines in their virgin wilderness
Passion of this interplay in nature's own precociousness

For night has bound the stars to sleepy stillness fading fast
And morning will create another day until it's passed
As dawn and dusk by right the undistinguished twins
To break upon the beaches where time valiantly begins

Copyright Kkh 6/20/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-20 10:35 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-20 10:44 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhh...this is sooooo beautifully sensual and filled with a powerful stirring voice, sweet fried, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) This reminded me of Laguna Beach for some peculiar reason, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton




"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-20-2002 10:45 PM).]

Martie
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3 posted 2002-06-20 11:00 PM


ThisDiamond

The imagery and rhythm of earth sing in this lovely poem.

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4 posted 2002-06-20 11:09 PM


Hi Kathy...it's me!  

Love the flow,  awesome imagery....AS ALWAYS.
lightly passionate with passions of earthly
things...

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-06-20 11:37 PM


Thank you.
ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-06-21 07:02 AM


This is just lovely, Kathy.
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