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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-20 09:30 PM


(Got the insparation to write this from my boyfriend Liam (ThunderMage) because he is just getting over a nasty cold.)

I am told
To face the common cold
You must be bold
Also the store gets your money for medicine sold

Laid up in bed
Sick in the head
You feel like lead
So it is said

You are in misery
When your sick with a cold
So be strong and be bold
Until the misery is gone.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-06-20 09:59 PM


Loner... (sniff)....Do you two have seperate
computers?  Hope you don't have to fight
over one....

Hope Liam gets well soon...

alterego
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since 2002-02-23
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2002-06-20 10:13 PM


Cute poem...  just got over one of those really nasty ones, just like Liam's.  Sympathy expressed!!!

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devina
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Cali
3 posted 2002-06-21 12:57 PM


*sniffles* here...

*waving tissue at ya'll*

cute read girlie!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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4 posted 2002-06-21 02:15 AM


i hate having a stuffed up nose..thats the worst! Take care of your sweetheart
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-06-21 11:03 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Aw, I'm so sorry your Liam has a cold, I hope he gets well soon, this is compassionately heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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