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I Am Not A Quitter!
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I Am Not A Quitter! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I was born in Texas~this I can prove We moved to Oklahoma~when I was only two She said I was already learning to read This is hard for me to believe, too Sneaking out~while her back was turned (1957) I sat there on the curb~as the cars went by A big mack truck hit me~sending me 150 feet Doctors told her I wouldn't live~that was a lie Mom took me home and worked with me everyday Teaching me how to do~what I had already learned Learning the second time~was harder than the first In order to teach me~she had to stay real firm Nerve and motor damage is what they said I had The doctors couldn't believe it~the day I walked in They took me down the hospital hall~showing me off Proving that I had learned to walk~once again Even went to school~just like the rest of the kids Once again I had learned~ to read and write Did not always make the best of grades Still I kept on trying~and sometimes I was right Being slower to learn~than the other kids Alot of times~I just wanted to give up and quit But, I never was a quitter~I just struggled on Just to prove to everyone~I was not unfit Sometimes, it takes me a little bit longer To learn things~that come so easy to you Only after trying two or three times~I find I can do almost everything~that you all can do Thank you, Mom, for not giving up on me like the doctors had done. If it hadn't of been for all your determination it was a battle~I wouldn't have won. By Sue 6-18-02 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a great story, Sue. I also almost lost my life as a baby. But I'm still here, too. Good for us, I think  Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thank you, Mom, for not giving up on me like the doctors had done. If it hadn't of been for all your determination it was a battle~I wouldn't have won. =============================== Reading this make me believe you must be a miracle baby!! This is a wonderful poetic tribute and testament to your and your mothers tenacity and inner will. You are to be commended for all that you have overcome. A mothers love and a childs determination turned tradgedy into triumph! Thank you for sharing this with us... its a lesson for us that others have struggles much greater than our daily trials. take care Poetess! jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ She didn't give up on you ... and it's good to see her strength living on in you~ VERY nicely done, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Oh Sue, I cried all throughout this touching and brave poem, I know this must have taken a lot of heart to write and we are all sooooo proud of you and know you will only ontinue to grow richer in love, for you and your mom are true angels! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this poem a lot. Can't wait to read more. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, you are not slow, just taking your time...for you are a smart chick...Remember? Thank you for sharing this part of your life with us.....I am glad your Mom didn't give up... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sandra I think maybe it is good that we are still here, too. Cause if we weren't we wouldn't have gotten to know each other. Janet Marie Thank you for your kind comment. There has been times When I didn't feel so lucky. Marge Thank you for being there. And, for all of your inspiration and help. You are a very Dear Friend. Noah Thank you for all of your kind replies. And, for all of your "kisses on the cheek" and your "big hugs". I think you are an angel yourself. the_loner_23 I am glad you enjoyed it. Magnus Thank you so much for your kind reply. You have no idea how much your comment means to me. You are so kind. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is an absolute gem, Sue.... I am so happy that your mom worked so hard to get you back...because otherwise, we wouldn't have you here with us... And I bet that now, you learn just as fast or maybe even faster than the rest of us...  ~ scholarly hugs for learning so wellLyra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She didn't give up on you... and you didn't give up on you, either. *S* This is a testament to the strength and determination both you and your mom have in abundance. *S* Excellent!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, you are one smart chick, for knowing the value of your mother, for not giving up. You have learned all the right lessons and you write amazing narratice poetry. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You told this so well, and I love the tale you told. Some people go down the highway faster than others, but if they reach the same destination in the end, what does it matter? I've never had the tenacity you have exhibited, I congratulate you on it, and on your success. Well done. Nan |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I just knew you weren't a quitter sweet lady, I saw that in class. You had a good MOM Sue, she deserves a tribute. And you girl, just write on that beautiful poetry of yours, I always enjoy to read it.  TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
of course you are not! glad to learn that you are still writing this will make an excellent Chicken Soup story...do send this for publication so that more people will have the fortune to enjoy this read... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ooch...that must have hurt...in more ways then one... This shows what you can do with desire and determination...congratulations...James |
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Ryan2801 New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 9Scotland,U.K. |
Thank you for sharing your life's struggle and congrats on you and your mothers strong will and determination, proving too all if you put the mind to it we can accomplish amost anything.Such a heart felt piece, I loved it, look forward to more off your work.Ryan2801 xxxxx |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A wonderful write...and a tribute to both you and your Mom.. ~soft smiles~ M |
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