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ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

0 posted 2002-06-20 05:35 PM

I know it hurts,
I feel the pain.
I feel your loss,
I feel my gain.
Which hurts more?
Forced to feel the hurt,
Of one I adore,
One with whom I flirt.
I face a monster
I face the strongest loss,
Like a man's dog,
Like a tree's moss.
I face a dark monster,
I face my own evil side,
But in the end,
In whom can I confide?

What is life without poetry and adventure?

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-06-20 06:16 PM

Welcome to Passions! I always like to welcome a fellow Canuck!

Good discussion with yourself....I know it's harder to understand oneself than anything else. Don't tend to see ourselves in a bad light do we?
Good write!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-06-20 06:27 PM

I liked this one. The first four lines were especially powerful, and the last two were a good ending.

Nan

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2002-06-20 08:27 PM

Thanks everyone.

What is life without poetry and adventure?

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-06-20 08:54 PM

Very good expression of emotion.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-20 09:48 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Liam, this is sooooooo heartwrenchingly powerful, sweet friend, i hope through all the pain you both find solace and stillness! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-06-20 09:52 PM

Nicely written with power...

Welcome to PiP. Do hope you enjoy your time
here..

alterego
Member

since 2002-02-23

Posts 113
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2002-06-20 10:19 PM

Welcome to PiP!!! Interesting conversation with your "evil" self - hope your "good" side won.

Sympathy to you, friend, for the cold you have, and yes, there are lot's of Canadians here... that's 'cause we're a real creative bunch - eh!!

ss

Create something infinite today - Smile!!!

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

8 posted 2002-06-20 10:35 PM

Thanks everyone.

What is life without poetry and adventure?

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