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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I walk an edgy fine line now in danger yet of falling down A crooked path with no way out lest someone near should hear my shout. Relentlessy I carry on in hopes of love to come upon A knight in armour-he would do salvation, and a lover too. I walk the edge, cliffs all around perhaps stability is found My dream shall never fade from sight for truest love is yet my right. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marvelous...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes it is your right! James used the word marvelous and I have to agree with him! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, yes, and I know with all my heart true happiness will come your way as you stand near the edge of your dreams! (big huggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, my heart is with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes it is, Sandra! And, I hope you find your true love, soon. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....I once told a friend of mine, who had the same basic problem...to have faith and patience, that love would find her and she would feel the joy.... My friend, have patience and faith, love will find you, you will feel the joy... Walk that path with one foot before the next and with certainty that you will not fall far...if you do at all... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Uplifting and lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very lovely, Sandra... Your true love will find you as soon as you stop looking for him.... it always works...  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I like your love poems catalinamoon, mine all seem to be written from the other side (after the love affair). Hugs, oh,that? That's a..uh...roll of quarters, yeah, that's it. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I have to agree with the chipmunk on this one, Sandra. Your prince will come! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Once in awhile the words come out so perfectly that they can't miss and this is one of those times. Wonderfully expressed and penned equally so. Yes, it is your right and I still hold to what I said months ago, not only will you find it but you will know why the best in life is worth all the wait you never thought you could make it through. Much enjoyed. |
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