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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2002-06-20 04:13 PM



What must I do, to hold your heart,
What words shall I say, to put you
under my spell,

Oh, my love, my hero, my dream,
Your heart is so lovely,

So warm as the sun,
I feel it embrace me,

What kiss must I give,
So moist and tender, upon thy lips,

What emotion shall I display for you,
What must I give to hold your heart?

For it is a treasure, a rare find,
You keep it under lock and key,

I would do anything for you,
My heart I would gladly give,

My life that I live,
Just to hold your heart,

To feel it beating inside my hands,
and when I am holding your poetry,

I am holding your heart!

© Copyright 2002 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-20 06:42 PM


Very true, romantic one.....our hearts are in our work. Yours is wonderful
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2 posted 2002-06-20 09:45 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know your love will always swoon over your gorgeous words and will happily hold your heart with loving care compassionately forever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Millette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-06-20 09:46 PM


I love the romance in this. Makes me happy.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-06-20 09:50 PM


An extremely romantic and loving poem.  May
you always hold his heart as two hearts beat
as one...

Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2002-06-21 01:39 AM


Heart and soul is found in poetry every day and you are so right on in your words.  Wonderful expression and very enjoyable read.  
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6 posted 2002-06-21 02:10 AM


ARH, your words have been missed. A lovely write.

Parker

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7 posted 2002-06-21 06:06 PM


Very nice...James
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8 posted 2002-06-21 09:18 PM


I love the way you touch the romantic here, Millette

I enjoyed it very much

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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