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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-06-20 01:07 PM




Poets are This

Yellow flames, blue streams
Esteem found among our dreams
Together as one



Extremes to endure
Cannot live without either
Condensation kissed

Here is your dream then
In the cool heat of your mind
Live your moments well


Dedicated to All of Passions' Poets
Write, and do so
As if your life depends on it

Photography: K R Jungel



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-20 02:42 PM


A lot of truth here. I like this very much.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-06-20 02:56 PM


Karilea....truer words were never spoken.
~Love these...hugs!

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3 posted 2002-06-20 04:16 PM


so, it's you that has my dream. . .

wonderful my friend, as is your photography. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2002-06-20 05:09 PM


Yeek! I know how hard it is to write Japanese poetry and you did a great job Sunshine!
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5 posted 2002-06-20 06:24 PM


You are really adding to your poetry with
your Pics...  Enjoy both immensely.

As though my life depended on it? ooooo,
now that is something to inspire one, is
it not???!!!

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2002-06-20 06:35 PM



Well first I'd say you wrote again a beautiful senryu to a beautiful pic.

Second, I just worked my head off in class and now it's aching...me head that is.

Being (or thinking I am) a poet is a hard days work

But you did a nice job here, sigh

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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7 posted 2002-06-20 07:08 PM


Karilea

You are quite a photographer as well as poet.  Loved these and that!

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8 posted 2002-06-20 07:10 PM


enjoyed
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YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, yes, and through the flame may our quills be cast in liquid gold and may we unleash the elements of inspiration with every pens brandish! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, thank you so much for this tribute to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-06-20 11:37 PM


Thank you so much, Karilea...
what a lovely tribute

I have been here at Passions for a bit over 6 months now, and have found so much love here that I never want to leave...

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-06-20 11:42 PM


A little picture sure doesn't hurt this beautiful work...as a matter of fact, I felt a little fire under my conscience to write a bit.

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

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12 posted 2002-06-21 11:29 AM


Well done, Karilea!
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13 posted 2002-06-21 12:29 PM


Well said!
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