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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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night is virescent moss in blanket drape patinate slumber on black legged tree sides river clouds walk quiet shoes bare with warm mud muslin stockings and meadow brook mantle we make velure songs whisper with our glove hands in pockets we breathe hurry air humid with bucket mouth wanting we are damp noise in shamrock forests you are tree need moans bending I am wind legs with quick feet climbing ripple steppes from sapphire streams are our shimmer flannel sounds like canvas with straw dancing there we are shadows walking on sky ground ©Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
we are shadows walking on sky ground right up to the last line, just way cool stuff DS, good morning...... I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks D...good morning to ya back.. you need a photo up ya know!!! (grin) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads...the images are making me sleepy, sleepy.... [slap face!] Ah...that's it! Much better. Now off to work! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I could envision the crisp luscious mountainside reading this while camping out, this is another wonderful summer read! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine..bring that face here...let me spank it a lil bit..thanks for the read babe. noah, thanks amigo for the peek in wave. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Good morning! You see in the dark so beautifully, must be the animal in you. Your word power is amazing! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dark, Your last line is awesome. Wonderful. Nan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
martie thanks to you little friend...waving from the sun shine this am....hope you can see me. nan, bless you for your reviews, and your comments, humble thanks |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
we are damp noise in shamrock forests Between here...and there...you are "Bealach fada anonn 's anall a chóich'" (a long way back and forth forever) save you some translation time.~wink* Sincerely, Reg |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You and she are lots of things, and they all seem to be wonderfully sensual and interesting.(I really like the "we are" lines..) Sandra |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful..... ~~ connie ~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina thanks for that line, you sliver tongued diva you..thanks for the read babe. Sandra, yes the we stuff is my fav' too, thanks for your touch Connie, always a pleasure to have your reviews, thanks to you |
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